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#1  2008-07-14 10:45:07

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``-My Sweet Obsession[UPDATED] [Chap. 2]





Characters:


Boys
Jeno De Vivar-super cool na basketball player
John Alleck Villasana- bestfriend ni sweetzel.
Axel Buensalida- super cute na bestfriend ni jeno.
extras -mga mangaasar lng - :P
Mga classmates nina jeno and alleck:
Lester Yap
John Mark Reyes
Girls
Sweetzel Go- a verii sweet girl
Hazel Francisco- magiging bridge nina sweetzel at jeno
Trixie Mendoza-girlfriend ni axel/friend nina sweet&trixie.
extras -kontrabidas-
Phia Cuenca-leader ng 'bratz' :lol:
Christine Zenido-assistant ni Phia
members:
Daphne Rosa
Yasmine Bontoc
Rina mae reyes
Nice Saret

Chapter one



Monday morning...last week of vacation..
Sweetzel: hello, pupunta kb now?
Hazel: of courz, pero mgbihis kna! punta tau sa moa! yu like?
Sweetzel: hmm, pdde sa park na lng tau pumunta? nkbili kc ako ng new book, i just wnt to read it sna in a quiet place.. ok lng b?
Hazel:ok, bsta ba ikaw, mgdadala ng foods eh!
Sweetzel: ok, see you.
At the park..may nkta clang grup of guys na nglalaro ng bsketball,...
sweetzel: omg :O cnu yung guy n nka black..kilala mo b?
Hazel: ai, na love-at-first sight ang gaga..tma?
Sweetzel: di noh, pero kilala mo b?
Hazel: hndi eh, pero bka kilala ni trixie.
Sweetzel: ah ok...maybe i cn take some pics. of him pra mtnong ko kay trixie.
click*click*
Next day sa house ni trixie,
trixie: ah, e2 b? hahaha lapitin toh ng girls eh!
Sweetzel: gnun.. so, cnu nga xa?
Trixie: si 'Laban' yun..
Sweetzel: ha?
Trixie: si Jeno yun, II-st. raphael dti, bkt b? type mo?
Sweetzel: hndi noh!
trixie: btw, sma ka skin tom?
sweetzel: san?
Trixie: dito nlng pla sweet, ok?
Sweetzel: ok, um, i nid to go n pla..bye trix.
Tinext agad ni trixie si jeno..

Laban, punta k nmn tom sa haus
3pm ha..pg di ka sumipot,, lgot ka sken!

1 message recieved from Laban:

ok, ppnta na ko, pero sma ko si axel ha,
bka mwla ako, hahaha ge bye.

3pm sa haus ni trixie,..
Trixie: ano b yan... tgal nila.
Sweetzel: sino ba yung mga yun?
Axel: kmi.. haha snxa na late tgal ni jeno mligo..
Sweetzel: :redface: si...si--jeno??!?
Jeno: hay, ako pa sinisi mo. :disgust:
Hazel: wee, welcome b ko dto?
Trixie: omg ! dmi ntn dto, dun tayo sa taas.
Jeno: um, hi. ano name mo po?
Hazel: Laban,  she's Sweetzel, my bestfriend.
Jeno: ah, saan k mgaaral dis yr?
Hazel: sa smi p rn bkt?
Jeno: nku po tlga nmn, oi taba, wg ka nga sumabat!
Hazel: grr. :mad:
Sweetzel: um, kw?
Jeno: dun din.
Sweetzel: ah..
Jeno: um, ge, puntahn ko lng c axel.
Hazel: o, ano na sweet?
Sweetzel: haiz, cool siya pero mdmi ata ako kaagaw :lol: jokez.
Hazel: haha. pero wlang gf un now.. aiee :P

School na naman haiz...

Alleck: sweet! bt ba tameme k dian! ano meron?
Sweetzel: wla nmn, bkt? :paranoid:
Alleck: obsessed k ata kay jeno :P
Sweetzel: uber k nmn alleck :mad:
Alleck: hahaha :lol:
Hazel: ow, shet.. sweet---zel, si laban mo oh! :o punasan mo nmn! pwis n pwis.
sweet: sira. :redface:
alleck: oist.. tsk, tsk, tsk :angry:
Jeno: ow, hi sa inyo :cool:
Alleck: hi, musta nmn bro, dme dyan oh, prang linta ang mata.
Hazel: ehem.. :/
Jeno: sino? :lol: um, sweet tart, peram nmn ng towel mo.
Sweet: huh? - omg... he called me sweet tart?! :redface: -

to be continued.



Chapter Two


Alleck&Hazel: yihii! burger nmn! sweethart pla ha! :eh:
Jeno: Ano nmn msma dun? :paranoid:
Sweetzel: ui, jeno e2 n oh.
Hazel: sweet nio nmn. :cry:
JM: oo nga.. dmi n langgam oh..
Alleck: yehey :lol: tara s canteen..!
Jeno: dito tayo ha, hintayin ko nlng kayo. ba't pla ang thmik mo sweet?
Sweet: wla lng, gutom lng cguro.
Alleck: ate, pbili nmn ng " special buko salad ice candy " :O whew..
JM: hndi pa gnwang ice candy,.. :P
Sweet: pnta lng ako clinic.. :wasted:
Axel: o, sn nmn ppnta un? walk out?
Jeno: hndi.. s clinic dw..
Trixie: ay gnun? what happen b?
Alleck: BH cguro.. :P
Trixie: ah.. eniwey, heiz, smhan mu amn ako s cashier.
Alleck: sma ko dian...
axel: oi jeno, may gsto kb kay sweet?
Jeno: hndi noh.. sbi ko sau si phia db?
Axel: ok.ok.ok.. tara tngnan ntin si sweet..
*walk.*walk.*walk.
Jeno: ok kna?
Sweet: mejo...
Jeno: / hinawakn ung hair ni sweet.,/ pagaling ka.. ;)
Sweet: yah.. xur. ge bye.
[i] uwian na..

Hazel: ui, hndi kb susunduin ni manong?
sweet: hndi eh, magco2mute lng nga ko.
Hazel:ow, ok, ingat ka. :)
Saturday, galaan nnman.. :penguin:
text message..from alleck..
gm..
guys, pnta keu dto s haus nmen mea..
see ya.
after 30 mins. w8ting..
hazel: oh-my-gosh! sweet, si jeno oh, nka yellow shirt!
gosh.. ang cool... :cool:
Jeno: hi .. whew,
Sweet: hi jeno. :redface:
Axel&jm: andto n pla cla.
hazel: hmm, asan nmn c lester at trixie ha? sumthng fishy?
axel: my pinunthan c trixie noh! :mad:
JM: si les, may date ata.. buti p xa,. :cry:
alleck: ok fyn, dto tau s taas guys.
hazel: hmm, laro kaya tayo... kng cno mbunot ni alleck kailangan gwin ung consequence n
ibbgay nia.. ok?
jm: ok..ok :/
Hazel: go, alleck. ;)
alleck: si... :paranoid: JENO :D
Axel: woah.. =D
alleck: .. yeah.. :cool: bwahahaha =D e2 simple lng,...
ang
ggwin mo...

kiss sweetzel on her cheeks within 10 mins. =D
sweet: what?!?!?! :o
Hazel: wohoo.. :P
jeno: mdli lng pla eh.. ok..
sweet: :o omg..


*muah.. :redface:

-- to be continued.. :P



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story edited. :cry:

Last edited by yna_16 (2008-07-23 10:32:36)


#2  2008-07-14 10:48:59

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Re: ``-My Sweet Obsession[UPDATED] [Chap. 2]

WooOo..
nice story sis!

Next chappie,,!


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#3  2008-07-14 10:57:42

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Re: ``-My Sweet Obsession[UPDATED] [Chap. 2]

wew, sistah..!!
new story huh?
aabangan kuh 2h
weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee...
next chappie nah :P



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#4  2008-07-14 11:42:37

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Re: ``-My Sweet Obsession[UPDATED] [Chap. 2]

tnx to both of you.
im not xur. if oders will like my story. :rolleyes:
i thnk i cn post the nx chap. on sat. im busy in school.
but i hope oders will like this :)

Last edited by yna_16 (2008-07-14 11:45:02)


#5  2008-07-15 01:27:30

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Re: ``-My Sweet Obsession[UPDATED] [Chap. 2]

good luck to your story :eh:

aabangan ko ito, and i think others will like it too ;) :thumbsup:


#6  2008-07-16 12:07:49

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Re: ``-My Sweet Obsession[UPDATED] [Chap. 2]

tnx for the comments.
sorry, i edited teh whole story. hope u like the new one.

Last edited by yna_16 (2008-07-18 08:24:46)


#7  2008-07-16 12:44:01

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Re: ``-My Sweet Obsession[UPDATED] [Chap. 2]

:thumbsup:wow.parang nice po ung story:Dhhntayn ko chap 2:D

#8  2008-07-18 08:50:06

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Re: ``-My Sweet Obsession[UPDATED] [Chap. 2]

gee, tnx. ill post the chap2 tom. ;)


#9  2008-07-18 11:37:57

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Re: ``-My Sweet Obsession[UPDATED] [Chap. 2]

sistah next na!! bwahahaha,, i'll wiat fur ur next update :eh:



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#10  2008-07-18 12:34:11

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Re: ``-My Sweet Obsession[UPDATED] [Chap. 2]

wow sis..bagong story..aabangan ko toh :D



credits to my student>>waber GM demonyitang baliw for moi siggy..:)

#11  2008-07-18 12:41:27

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Re: ``-My Sweet Obsession[UPDATED] [Chap. 2]

wee. hehe. ill post the chap 2 tom. pls w8 for it :)
sorry guys, im only on a netcafe.. i forgot to bring my ntbk. hehe.
i write first the nx chap. ill write it tom. swear :cry:
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Last edited by yna_16 (2008-07-21 09:39:55)


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