#1 2008-07-15 09:30:57
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would you die for me?
i'm dianne.i am a shy girl. a very shy girl. that's why i don't have friends a lot. i really think that no one ever cared for me.
except a boy naming carl. and this is our simple story.
KRRRRRRIIIING!
the bell rang. i run towards the door of my classroom. i'm so nervous that i don't know what to do, i am a transferee from our province.
OUCH! i was scratched by a nail in my chair.
CARL: are you okay miss? ingat ka, medyo maraming sirang upuan. may sugat ka.
DIANNE: no, wala toh.
CARL: sa susunod magingat ka.
while he is talking to me, pinupunasan nia ung sugat ko sa binti. i don't know what to say. i'm way so speechless while he's doing that action. kasi naman, cno ba ako para itrato niya ng ganito??
KRING!
that's thebell for our recess. i decided not to go to the canteen, i prefer scanning my books for the next lesson.
CARL: okay na ba ung sugat mo?
DIANNE: medyo masakit pa, heto na pala ung panyo mo. ay. lalabhan ko na lang.
CARL: no. no need. sayo na lang. kain tayo.
DIANNE: ayoko, cge kaw na lang, sunod na lang ako.
CARL: ayoko na nga lang di. samahan na lang kita dito.
we spend our recess studying, i am staring him secretly. but i do think he can feel it.
why does he is so kind to me? does he like me. i don't want to expect. but i'm really assuming he do.
i'm walking towards to our house. medyo malayolayopa ang lalakarin ko ng bigla kong nakita si carl, he was riding on his bike.
CARL: angkas ka na.
DIANNE: ayaw ko, natatakot ako.
CARL: cge na. cge ka!
DIANNE: huh?
CARL: cge ka. masasagasaan ka... ng... kariton!
he convince me. umangkas ako sabike nia.
CARL: kumapit ka ng mahigpit.
DIANNE: hah... pero...
pinakapit niya ako sakanya. it seems like i was hugging him so tight.
what will happen next?
..to be continue..
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#2 2008-07-15 10:23:08
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oohh.. a story from a newbie! wow! aabangan ko 2! mkang exciting..hehe!! gud luck po sa story..
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#3 2008-07-15 10:29:41
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whew.ganda ng story ah.ung banner plang nae-excite na ku.haha.update na! 
^perst time.haha.lol.xD
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#4 2008-07-15 10:55:33
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^ nice intro;)..san na yung continuation nito??
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#5 2008-07-16 08:44:10
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Re: would you die for me?
russell18 wrote:
oohh.. a story from a newbie! wow! aabangan ko 2! mkang exciting..hehe!! gud luck po sa story..
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E-mail PM Friendster Re: would you die for me?whew.ganda ng story ah.ung banner plang nae-excite na ku.haha.update na!
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#4 Yesterday 10:55:33
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E-mail PM Friendster Re: would you die for me?^ nice intro;)..san na yung continuation nito??
maraming mamatz puh!
ahihi.
if you enjoy this?
cguro mas magugustuhan niyo itoh.,
http://friendstertalk.com/t38333-sisz..…ter-3.html
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#6 2008-07-16 09:27:31
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wow!!! i'm so kilig... sobrang ganda ng story.. can't wait for the another chapter.
love it.
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#7 2008-07-16 10:19:45
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Re: would you die for me?
weeeeh!.,
haha...
a new s2ry frm newbie huh?!.,
heheh.
aabangan qouh 2h sis!.
heheh...
interesting na ang story... title pa lang!.
ehehe...
ur s2ry s nyc!.
hmmm..
what wll gnna hppen nxt?!.,
hmmmm..
i'll w8 4 da nxt chappie sis!
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#8 2008-07-16 10:30:05
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Re: would you die for me?
mmmmm..
hi
dianne
ive just read
ure '"short story"..
heeeheee
wr dsme
slyt!!!!
hehehh=)
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#9 2008-07-17 07:07:57
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blues_suzette88 wrote:
mmmmm..
hi
dianne
ive just read
ure '"short story".
yah mi too....it is beautiful from a newbie......they better rid it...
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#10 2008-07-17 08:13:01
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its quite nice..
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#11 2008-07-17 09:59:38
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Re: would you die for me?
CHAPTER 2
I LIKE HIM ALOT. that's what i've realized while studying on my bed. i can't forget his smile, his looks i do remember everything bout him.
CARL: gud morning! punta ka sa auditorium mamayang uwian.
DIANNE: baket?
CARL: basta sabi ni prof.
bakit aq lang ang cnabihan nito? hhmmm... anu kaya gagawin niya? but i do trust him.
KKRRRIINNGG!
that's the bell for our dismisal. i pack all my things and go to the auditorium. then sumone covered my eyes. but i know that was carl.
DIANNE: carl? anu bang problema? maypatakiptakip ka pa ng mata?
CARL: ay nakilala ako agad.
when he removed his hands from my eyes, i was so shocked when there was a table. table na parang pangdate.
DIANNE: is this for me?
CARL: yupz... for you and no one else.
why does he have to be like this? his actions makes me like him even more? but parang ang bilis? seryoso ba ito sa akin?
after we've finished to eat the foods carl prepared, we have our small conversation.
CARL: nagkabf ka na ba?
DIANNE: not yet.
CARL: liligawan kita..
DIANNE: ah...eh..
CARL: hihintayin kita... kahit anung mangyari.
again, there are so many questions entering my mind. baket ang bilis? seryoso ba tala toh? 2 days pa lang kaming magkakilala?
..to be continued..
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#12 2008-09-07 20:13:32
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good job!!
update!! update!!
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#13 2008-09-09 11:40:38
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nice story...
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