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#161  2008-05-17 15:14:30

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Re: Night Walks {Taglish story}

As usual. Maganda na naman ang chapter na nabasa ko. Hay. 3 chaps nlng pala ang mababasa ko sa mga susunod na araw. Wohoho! Pero good job po. Very good job. :thumbsup:

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#162  2008-05-17 16:17:53

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Re: Night Walks {Taglish story}

slamat s mga compliments

honestly speaking, i don't want to update this yet kasi i don't want it to end

but since i read your comments, i guess i'll update it already

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Chapter 14

I meant every word I said. I appreciate that he brought me to that room and I’m happy he did it. Siguro para sa iba mababaw lang yung ginawa niya, but it’s the most amazing thing a guy had done for me.

Sa room na yun, we talked about what happened with Nikki, Cloud and Aljay.

From that topic, kung saan-saan napunta yung usapan namin. Just like how I felt when we talked during breakfast, so easy and fun.

Naputol yung usapan namin when someone called. I let him take it.

“Hello? Yes. Yes it’s me. Room 208 po. Around 5:30. Yes. Okay. Thank you. Bye.”

I noticed, room 208 was the room we were in. After a while, may pumasok na hotel staff, nagdala ng pagkain tapos a bouquet of tulips.

“Lem, you don’t have to do this. It’s so expensive.”

“It doesn’t matter, as long as it’s for you.”

I melted with those words and I couldn’t help but smile. He gave me the bouquet. I wonder, most girls would rather have roses, how did he know I prefer tulips? And duh, eto yung kind of tulips na na-feature sa T.V eh. Yung Holand Tulips ba yon? Ayun na yun… eh ang mahal kaya ng tulips of that kind!

We ate the food prepared to us. Buti na lang tinuruan ako ni Mama ng formal table manners, if not, tigok ako dito.

It was a fine day. I temporarily forgot about the incident that morning. Pauwi, hinatid ako ni Lem, in a car.

“Wait lang. You didn’t have a car a while ago. Sasakay tayo dito pauwi?”

“Yes. Hop in.”

Naloka ako dun. San galing yung kotse? Eto, nagtanong na talaga ako.

“Kaninong kotse to?”

“Amin.”

“Amin meaning?”

“Sa family namin.”

“Pano napunta sa hotel-restaurant kanina?”

Lem laughed. Ano namang nakakatawa sa tanong ko? Baliw talaga to.

Pagdating ng subdivision namin, pinatigil ni Lem yung driver.

“Manong, thank you. Maglalakad na kami from here. Wag mo sabihin kay Mama ha!”

“Sige, Sir Lem. Basta ikaw!”

Sir Lem? Naman? Ano kaya yun? May Sir pa eh. Ganon ba siya ka-tanda para i-Sir?

Naglakad kami ni Lem pauwi.

“Lem, thanks for the day. You made me feel better.”

“I should be saying the same thing to you, Jae.”

6:00 P.M. kami nakauwi. Ang bilis naman. Tapos na ang araw. Ang daming nangyari.

When I went home, nag-shower lang ako and fixed myself, then I cooked the chicken with my sister’s given recipe. Then, I prepared the table.

Around 6:40 P.M, wala pa rin si ate. Oh well…

I took the bouquet of tulips and took a picture of myself with the flowers using my cellphone. I sent it to Lem, with my message.

Recipient: “Raindrops”
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-Tnx 4 ds day. i enjoyd ur company.. and tnx 4 d flowers as well. D ko alam pnu m nlaman but I actually love tulips. :). Jae-

A few moments later, dumating na si Ate Faye. Nice. Exact 7:00 P.M she was home, just like what she said.

She put down her things and kumain na kami. Kinuwento ko lahat ng nangyari pati yung paghatid sakin ni Lem sa hotel.

“Jae, anong surname ni Lem?”

“Bermillez.”

“Ewan ko ba sa’yo. Ang hina mo talaga. Kawawa ka naman.”

“Ate Faye talaga… Bakit naman?”

“Bermillez. Bermillez. Bermillez. Isipin mong mabuti. Doesn’t it ring the bells yet?”

“OMG!”

“Hay… at last.”

“Bermillez! Sina Lem yung may-ari ng Hotel-restaurant na yun?!”

I am so dumb. Ilang beses na nabalita yung Hotel-Restaurant nila. No wonder dire-diretso lang siya sa room at pinabayaan siya ng receptionist. No wonder he was able to afford those Holand tulips. No wonder nag-Sir sa kanya yung driver. No wonder he didn’t care if he would be spending a lot on me!

My eyes widened with amazement.

“Ang yaman pala nila!”




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#163  2008-05-17 17:47:09

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Re: Night Walks {Taglish story}

weeeh mai update n...kea lng i cant read it now...
bwal mg-emote d2 :lol:
ill read that later =D wen i gt home

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there i read it n...

wow rich
tama ung guess q., it's their place :lol:

he's so sweet :wow:

i dont want this story to end...but anyway.,
ill b watchng out for ur nxt releas/es :lol:

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#164  2008-05-18 01:58:01

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Re: Night Walks {Taglish story}

tnx for the update..

2 chapters nlang :cry:


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#165  2008-05-18 03:24:01

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Re: Night Walks {Taglish story}

waaaa! may-ari pala xa ng marriot hotel e. lol jk

nice .. update more.. sana sa side na naman ni Aljay kung anung gagawin nya.. ;) sana may action hahahahahaha  asa pa ako noh. :P

#166  2008-05-18 04:46:27

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Re: Night Walks {Taglish story}

hayup. mayaman pala kasi.
hahah. perfect match.

update na po.=|




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#167  2008-05-18 05:10:08

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Re: Night Walks {Taglish story}

ang yaman pala ni lem..wag mo na siya pakawalan jae mayaman na sweet pa..


#168  2008-05-18 05:26:22

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Re: Night Walks {Taglish story}

waahahaha. ang sweet. :wow: :wow: yaman pala ng loka. :lol: sus. swerte ni jae huh :retard: :retard: akin nalang si lem. :lol: :lol: jk. 2 chaps nalang. :( haaay. dapat 15 chaps pa. :lol: joke sis :P



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#169  2008-05-18 07:18:54

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Re: Night Walks {Taglish story}

dying to read the next chapter!good luck!

#170  2008-05-18 08:02:53

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Re: Night Walks {Taglish story}

waaaaaaaaaa he's so rich! :lol:



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#171  2008-05-18 14:59:00

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:arrow: wooooo sabi na eh. si lem may ari. wohaha.

so ano?

Kasalan na ba? :eh:

#172  2008-05-18 16:32:38

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Re: Night Walks {Taglish story}

This is Chapter 15

aun, tma ung mga hula ninyo...

sina Lem nga ang may-ari ng hotel haha

well, 2nd to the last chapter na

and i don't know if i will be ending this happily or not

what do you think?


@ shy 19: haha... nku y r u emoting? emo? hehe...

@ xxbubblie: welcome... yah 2 chaps nlng. well e2 nang isa, so 1 chap nlng

@ ate mizel: i'll be putting the lime light to aljay... soon. i promise :D

@ maree12: perfect match? haha, i hope mayaman dn ang perfect match q someday

@ cutiegal: waah, myaman + sweet = Lem? haha

@ minekoarch: haha... nku, e2 inupdate q na... update m n ulit story m ha... ang gnda keia nun

@ jhayyuliajay: e2 n po... nxt chap na!

@ ---mad4u---: sna aq rn rich haha

@ ate meng: i'll think about it... tngnan ntin kng may kasalan haha

Chapter 15

That night before I sleep, I tried calling Nikki but she was already asleep, so I called Cloud.

Just like what I thought, alam niya nga lahat.

Alam niyang may gusto si Lem sa akin at magugustuhan ko si Lem. Alam niyang may gusto si Nikki kay Aljay at may gusto naman si Ajay sa akin.

With that knowledge, nainis ako sa kanya dahil kung sinabi niya agad, then this wouldn’t be happening. Wala sanang love square.

“Jae, alam ko yung nararamdaman ninyo sa isa’t-isa but even with that in my mind, I don’t think I have the right to interfere with any of your relationships. I’m just a mutual friend to all of you. I help each of you to be close with the person you like but I will never ever control what you want to do with your life.”

I knew na may point si Cloud kaya sa huli, hindi ko rin siya masisi.

Sunod kong tinawagan si Aljay. Nag-sorry siya sakin, which I accepted. Nagulat ako na kahit siya na mataas ang pride, nagpakumbaba.

“Sorry. Nabigla ako kanina. Hindi ako dapat nagwala  o nagalit. Nag-usap na kami ni Lem. Okay na kami.”

Pero sa telephone conversation namin, hindi yun ang natandaan ko. What I remembered are the last two sentences he told me before he said goodnight and hung up.

“Lem deserves you more than I do so give him a chance. Mahal na mahal ka niya at alam kong ganon ka rin sa kanya.”

Okay na ako kay Lem, Cloud at Aljay. Kay Nikki na lang. Si Nikki na best friend ko, ni hindi ko man lang matawagan. After two days, tsaka ako nagdecided na tawagan siya.

“At the count of three I will dial her number. One… Two… Thr—“

*Riiing*

“Hello?”

“Hello Jae? I’m so sorry. I couldn’t stand being mad at you. Alam mo namang best friend kita eh. Hindi dapat kita sinisi sa lahat ng nangyari.”

Nikki was talking very fast, indicating that she was nervous, at the same time she was crying.

In the end, we both admitted our faults and nagkabati.

The next day, officially nanligaw si Lem.

It’s been 3 weeks since that incident. Natapos naman namin yung project, with flying colors. Masaya because despite of the experience we had, maganda ang kinalabasan ng project.

The day we were supposed to pass the project, absent si Lem. Pagpasa pa naman namin ng project, papanoorin ng klase bawat documentary tapos wala siya. Sayang naman.

However, that wasn’t what struck me. What struck me is that 2 days na siyang absent and wala akong narerecive na message from him. With the two days he was absent, malakas ang naging bulung-bulungan na may aalis na student to study abroad.

At ang hula nila, si Lem. Baka daw to prepare sa pagmamanage ng Hotel-Restaurant nila kaya lilipat ng ibang bansa para mag-aral.

Although walang official record and proof na siya nga yung aalis, I was worried.

Wala namang ibang pwedeng umalis ng school aside from him eh.

My friends assured my that it wasn’t Lem… at na kung siya man yun, magsasabi siya sakin.

I wanted to satisfy my curiosity so badly at nagmamadali akong umuwi kaya hindi ko namalayan nalaglag na pala sa kung saan yung cellphone ko. I just discovered that later on nung nakauwi ako, Pero di ko pinansin, what I needed is tumawag sa bahay nila.

“Si Sir Lem po? Naku, nasa France po eh.”

Those words, those words… had crushed my world.




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#173  2008-05-18 17:09:00

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Re: Night Walks {Taglish story}

:arrow: OMG SO YAMAN!

that hurts. lol

Ayun, after ng saya
andun ang Lungkot.

OMG OMG OMG.
wag agawin ni aljay si jae kay lem!

di pede.

wak mo muna tapusin :crybaby:
update lang ng update.

weee... buti naisip ko mag log in uli.. haha First one!

#174  2008-05-18 17:17:49

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Re: Night Walks {Taglish story}

haha

gising ka ng ganitong oras ate meng?

wait lang ah

wag muna tapusin,
update lng ng update

db mejo contradicting yun?

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#175  2008-05-18 17:30:01

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:arrow: meaning...............


habaan yung story.. wahahahaha... kase alam mo un.. ang ganda eh.. hehehe..

gantong oras ako naglalakbay sa net. lol.
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#176  2008-05-18 17:37:49

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Re: Night Walks {Taglish story}

ahaha, tnx

i wish i could make it longer pero kelangan na tapusin bcoz mlapit na magpasukan

and may nakaabang naman na na new story eh

i think you'll like it too

well, i just read ur story din, i lyk it

:D

**signing off: i'll sleep na**




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#177  2008-05-18 21:26:17

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Re: Night Walks {Taglish story}

waaah =(
sbi n may twist nnmn eh :crybaby:
nemen.

nsa france c lem.,
mgksama kme :lol: =D
akin nlng xa lolerz :P


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#178  2008-05-19 00:34:22

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Re: Night Walks {Taglish story}

sayang! maganda na sana...nag-abroad p kasi si lem..ano kaya ang gagawin ni jae?


#179  2008-05-19 02:03:09

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Re: Night Walks {Taglish story}

sainyo na c lem.. XD
toinks.. :lol:
haha..
isang  chappie nlang :cry: tpos pumunta pa xang france :crybaby:..

ate, kung kaya wag mo muna ipost yung last chapter. XD joke.. ^^
malapit na psukan :cry: sna yung next story gnyan din..

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#180  2008-05-19 05:09:42

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babalik naman siguro si lem noh? or susunod ni jae?:eh:


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