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#21 2008-05-19 11:30:21

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@eclipse_twins: nyak. mas lalo ka na..
@sasha008: tnx for reading

bukas ko nalang update yung story..

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#22 2008-05-19 11:40:42

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so long!! i'll read it later.. lol
looks good..

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#23 2008-05-19 12:38:16

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nice!
hope to read the next chapters soon!!

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#24 2008-05-19 13:27:41

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yeah, your story is so cool... just because of your boredom...

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#25 2008-05-19 14:07:36

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wow! 'galing nmn nia'
cant wait 4 d nxt chapter sis!
im looking forward to it!

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#26 2008-05-19 14:12:22

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i think rica is inlove with dan. XD

hula hula lng

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#27 2008-05-19 14:16:47

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bket bukas pa

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#28 2008-05-20 01:50:20

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ou nga .. now na ..
wag ipagpabukas ang pwede namang gawin ngayon ..
hehe

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^ ou nga .. XD

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#30 2008-05-20 06:26:03

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Chapter 5
sunday

08:25 am..

"anak.. get up. pupunta na tayo ng church maya-maya.. you should be dressed already.. yung brother mo kanina pa nakabihis, ikaw nalang hinihintay.. go!" sabi ng mom ko..
*yawn. im still sleepy.. "ok mom. just wait for me.. 30 minutes lang to.. " .. "ok.. bilis ha..
"opo..

naligo na ko and nagbihis.. nagmamadali kasi baka iwan nila ako.. i wore a blue dress.. after kong magbihis and all, bumaba na ko kasi hinihintay na nga nila ako..

"anak, dali na.. pasok ka na ng car..
"ok mom." paglabas ko.. laking gulat ko ng makita ko si.. "dan-"
"hi lor.. sorry nung isang araw.. lasing lang ako.. sorry..
"its ok.. alam ko naman eh.. so, masaya ka ba sa birthday mo?" .. "of course.. nandun ka eh.."
"ano naman kung nandun ako?
"eh ngayon ka lang pumunta sa party ko.. kaya-"
"anak.. iho, pasok na ng car.. maya na kayo magkwentuhan, ok?" .. "ok mom." then pumasok na kame ng car..
"ohh by the way, i havent seen your bro.. where is he?" .."uminom lang daw po siya ng water, tita.." sabi ni daniel..
"oh ok.. would you mind calling him iho? kasi mala-late na tayo sa mass.. we better hurry.."
"oh mom. ayan na pala eh.. hindi na kailangan tawagin.. pasok na bro.." .. "ok sis. tara na.."

katabi ko si daniel sa car.. but di ko siya pinapansin.. nang biglang..

"Lor.." .. "yes?"
"thanks ah..
"for what?! .. wala naman akong ginagawa ah?" .. "basta.. thanks..
"ohh ok.. your welcome then.." nag-uusap lang kami ng pabulong.. kasi we dont want to disturb my mom and dad.
"ok, nandito na tayo.. baba na kayo and pa-park ko lang yung car.." dad said.

bumaba kami ng car nang ako'y biglang nadulas.. gosh kakahiya.. buti nalang sinalo ako ni daniel.. kindi, basag ulo ko nito..

*ouch.. "thanks dan.." .."mag-ingat kasi sa pagbaba.. ayan tuloy.." then he laughed nang-aasar pa.. kakainis..
"joke lor.. kaw naman kasi eh.. di mo tinitignan dinadaanan mo..
"tse.. kakainis.." tumayo na ako bigla.. "thank you ha!!!"
"joke lang yun.. sorry lor.. " .."ok..

pagpasok namin ng church.. naka-simangot ako.. nakakainis kasi.. tapos naka-chansing pa itong si daniel sa kin.. nahawakan pa nya yung napaka-soft kong kamay.. kainis. siya pa lang yata yung unang guy na nakahawak sa kamay ko.. WTH!!

"anak.. wag ka sumimangot.. nasa simbahan tau.." .."ok mom. then i smiled." pero deep inside inis na inis pa rin ako.. it was just a fake smile.. grrr..

may two (2) vacant seat sa likod nila mom.. eh kami nalang ni daniel yung walang upuan, so dun kami umupo.. magkatabi na naman kami!! haaaaay! kakainis.. umupo na ko..

"lor.. im sorry na..
"ok nga lang yun diba!
"hindi eh.. sorry na.. sorry.. sorry.. sorry.." .."ok. tumigil ka na.. ang ingay mo.. ok lang yun.. forget about it."
"thanks.. basta sorry na ah.. di na po mauulit.." did he just say, "po"?! po.. po.. para naman akong matanda..

after the two-hour mass.. dumiretso kami sa mall. para kumain ng lunch..

"ma, sa kfc nalang!
"ano? kfc nalang tayo?.. "yeah. kahit saan. basta masarap yung pagkain." sabi ni louie..
"ok. kfc, here we go! " kulit ng mom namin .. hahahah

after we eat.. umuwi na kagad kami kasi may pupuntahan pa daw si dad na important.. what the!? mas important pa sa amin yung pupuntahan nya.. *sigh pagdating namin ng bahay.. pumunta kagad ako sa room ko to check my ym. kung may mail.. kaya nagmadali ako..
i logged in. nagulat ako ng may biglang nag-pm sa akin.

BUZZ!!
unknown: hi
vanity.doll: hello?
unknown: i just want to say..
vanity.doll: what? who are you?
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what the!? cno kaya yung mistery man na yun.. hay nevermind. anyway, may nag-pm na naman sa kin.. and si ano.. si-

cirecirecire: hi lorie
vanity.doll: hello cire lorie?
cirecirecire: simula ngaun, lorie na tatawag ko sayo..
vanity.doll: bakit naman?
cirecirecire: wala lang.. ok lang ba?
vanity.doll: yeah. anything for you..
cirecirecire: thanks lorie
vanity.doll: no prob cire.. (kinikilig na ng todo ang lola nyoooo! )
cirecirecire: nakita kita sa church kanina.. katabi mo si dan..
vanity.doll: ahh.. yeah. saan ka naka-upo?
cirecirecire: dun kami sa bandang likod.. lapit lang kami sa place nyo.. actually, nadaan mo pa nga ako..
vanity.doll: aww. ganun ba, sorry. di kita napansin..
cirecirecire: ayus lang yun. di naman talaga ako kapansin-pansin.
vanity.doll: ngee. di noh. sorry ha..
cirecirecire: ok nga lang! basta ikaw..
vanity.doll: hehe thanks.. uhmm..
cirecirecire: bored? hehe. anyway, may sha-share lang ako sayo..
vanity.doll: ok. ano yun?
cirecirecire: paano ba ang feeling ng nagkaka-crush?! coz you see, may crush kasi ako sayo.. hehe..
vanity.doll: awww.. serious ka? (whaaaaaat! crush daw ako ni cire?? )
cirecirecire: sorry sa pag-amin. di ko na mapigilan eh.. and you see, pranka akong tao.. and you know, i think i love you..
vanity.doll: awwww.. wag ka nga ganyan cire
vanity.doll: geh see you tom nalang. may gagawin pa ako.. thanks sa time cire..
cirecirecire: ok lorie.. see you. totoo yun ah.. hehe. geh ingat ka lorie..
vanity.doll: ok thanks cire. i will. bye.. take care rin..
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totoo ba yun!? i think not. hindi magkakagusto sa akin ang isang CIRE noh!? hindi. hindi. hindi. pero sa totoo lang, kinikilig na ako! hahaha cireeeeeeeeee! cireeeeeeeeeee! cireeeeeeeeee! cireeeeeeeee! tumatalon na ako sa kama ko sa sobrang tuwa.. nang bigla kong narinig tawa ni daniel sa baba.. naglalaro sila ng PSP ni bro.. bigla namang pumasok sa isipan ko si dan and yung mga sinabi nya nung birthday nya.. haaaaay! ni-open ko nalang yung ipod ko and nagsoundtrip..

now playing:
no air
artist: jordin sparks feat chris brown

sapul ako sa song.. para din akong hindi makahinga.. haaay! ano ba naman..

"Tell Me How im supposed to breathe with no air
Can't live can't breathe with no air
thats how i feel whenever you ain't there
its no air, no air.. "

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#31 2008-05-20 06:39:30

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haha
yehay first to comment!
nice!

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#32 2008-05-20 06:47:51

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wow haha
i think me and cirecirecire should team up hehe
charmcharmcharm and cirecirecire sus!!
nxt???
hehe

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#33 2008-05-20 09:35:24

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hahahahaha!

woooooooooooooooooooo!
i love the chappie:)

next next

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#34 2008-05-20 13:55:36

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lol @ Charm. natawa naman ako dun.. hahaha baka this story is inspired by you ha.. charmcharmcharm cirecirecire.. ansagwa siguro kung mengmengmeng

teka.. KFC ba kamo?

naku.. baka nakita ni Yana si Dan? lolengs.. pinaghalo eh noh

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#35 2008-05-20 16:19:00

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nice...

buti naglog-in aq...

i lyk the scene s simbahan

pero w8 lng

xmpre pgdting ng "our father" or "ama namin"

nagkaholding hands c dan and c lor..?

nku, kng mron nun haha... mas kilig

cguro insert m xa s POV ni dan... para msya...

if u think that wud make d story better...

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#36 2008-05-21 01:55:52

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wahaha . si dan na yan .

next chappie please..

tetetetetetetetetexxx!! xDDD
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#37 2008-05-21 03:53:52

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@ sis charm: hahaha. loka

maya ko nalang update yung story.. tralalala..

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#38 2008-05-21 03:57:20

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oki:D

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#39 2008-05-21 04:49:32

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Chapter 6

daniel's POV

"tol. saan si lor?" asked dan ..
"i think she's upstairs.. bakit?? you want me to call her?..
"ahh. no need. hehe..
"ah ok tol. bakit ba?" ... "uhmm. i think i like your sis.."
"what? you like my twin? kelan pa yan?..
"ngayong 3rd year highschool lang tayo.. ngayon ko lang siya nakilala kasi.." dan said.
"serious ka ba dyan??.. baka lokohin mo lang kapatid ko.. umayos ka.. kundi magkakaaway tayo.."
"yeah. im serious. hindi ba halata!? ..nahihiya kasi akong saibihin sa kanya.. kasi baka-"
"baka?! ano?".. "baka she dont like me.. baka she dont feel the same way.."
"sus. drama mo gusto mo tulungan kita sa kapatid ko?.. ay wag na pala.. kaya mo na yan.. "
*sigh .."and alam mo ba.. may sasabihin din pala ako.." .."ano yun?"
"remember mo nung birthday ko.. diba nag-inuman tayo?.. and nalasing ka nun.. honestly, tinago ko yung binibigay nyong beer sa kin, kasi ayaw ko malasing.. "
"eh loko ka pala eh! ibig sabihin, nilasing mo lang kame?" sabay batok sa kin.
" hahaha. oo parang ganun tol.. pasensiya na.. nag-aalala kasi ako kay lor nun. wala siyang kasama pauwi tapos lasing pa tayo.."
"sus. totoo ba yan!? " ..
"oo noh. nilapitan ko pa siya nun.. tapos may nasabi ako- .. nasabi ko na mahal ko siya.. hindi siya naniniwala kasi lasing lang daw ako.. pero sa totoo lang, hindi talaga. seryoso ako sa kanya, tol. seryoso ako sa kapatid mo..tapos tumakbo siya.. umiiyak.. gusto ko siyang sundan nun kasi baka mapano siya.. mali ba ginawa ko?"
"hindi naman. cge goodluck.. hahaha umuwi ka na.. gutom lang yan.. " nagpapatawa pa..

lumabas na ako ng bahay nila.. habang nasa daanan ako, i saw lor sa bintana. naka-dungaw.. parang may iniisip.. she's so pretty.. napaka-bait pa.. she's like, close to the word, perfect.. haaay lor, akin ka nalang sana..

sana lang.. feeling ko hanggang sana lang ako sa kanya.. *sigh

* * *

back to lor's POV..

bakit kaya nakatitig sa kin si daniel na yan? haaay.. ano ba naman yan. naguguluhan na ako.. si cire and si daniel.. haaay! bigla kong naalala yung stuff toy na binili ko nung birthday ni daniel.. nasa loob ng car yun so kinuha ko.. paglabas ko ng bahay.. nandun pa rin si daniel naka-upo sa gilid.. what the heck is he thinking?! baka mapano siya.. parang uulan na.. baka mabasa siya.. and magkasakit..
aww. teka teka! bakit ba ako concern sa kanya?! he's not somebody anyway.. tapos nilapitan ko si daniel..

"dan..
"lo-lor? why are you here?" ..
"kinuha ko lang yung stuff toy na binili ko nung birthday mo.. ang cute kasi.. parehas nga tayo eh.. "
"uh-uhm.. oo nga noh.. umuwi ka na.. uulan na oh.. baka maulanan ka pa.." at umulan nga...
"awwww.. umuulan na.. "
"oo. and you better go home.."
"auko. gusto ko maligo sa ulan! .. ikaw, umuwi ka na kaya.. "
"ganun.. then ill stay with you.. " ..
"baka magkasakit ka.."
"hindi yan.. kesa naman wala kang kasama diba?" .."hmm. ok " pakipot pa ang loka. gusto ko rin naman na samahan niya ako..

biglang tumigil ang ulan.. and we decided to go home.. "bye lor.." .. "bye dan.." naligo kagad ako.. habang naliligo ako, di ko maiwasan kumanta.. pagkatapos ko, kinuha ko yung blower para patuyuin yung buhok ko..

"sis.. saya ba? " .. "saya? ng? dont tell me pinapanood mo kami? hahaha loko ka talaga bro.. "
"oo noh. saya saya nyo eh.. uyyyyyyy.. "nang-aasar pa.. eh wala naman yun..

wala naman talaga yun eh diba?.. "

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waaaa! cool chappie:)

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