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woooah.

parang. "its too late to apologize"

cool story:)

so what happened next...
arrrrrrrrr
cant wait to see what happened next

btw..nice story... i learned some japanese word from your story..

...ahahahahaha....
....glad you liked it....
....just updated it....
....hehehehehe....

mad4u. ahahahah... actually i kinda based it on the song "Apologize",...hehehehehe....


krjalagat. glad you liked it. i'm kinda learning how to speak japanese for now... hehehehehe...

jhayyuliajay. thanks for the compliment....hahahaha.... don't call me ate by the way.... i'm, just fourteen palang po....hehehehehe....

sherina. glad you liked it po. medyo may writer's block ako ngayon...ahahahaha.... but i'll try upadting it each day....

Last edited by _fire_tree_ (2008-05-29 14:29:03)

"Mama?" she asked.

"Don't you remember?" the woman asked.

"I....I....I.... i don't remember anything..." she said.

They were shocked as the words echoed through their minds. It was my fault!! Ryuuma thought as he kept hiding all the anguish in his heart. He suddenly punched the wall.

"Ryuuma!! Yamero!!(Stop it!!) Stop hurting yourself... What's done is done. There's no turning back! The best that we should do....is accept the fact that....that...." their mother said. She began crying. She felt hopeless....she didn't want anything like this to happen to her daughter...she didn't wanna blame her son either... it wasn't his fault he was drunk....right??....just then a knock came at the door...

"Tita! I heard what happened. How is she?" a guy wearing a black polo top over a white shirt said. She looked at him....he seemed familliar....

"Josh!! I'm glad your here. How's Bryan?" their mother said recovering from her state of shock.

"He's slowly improving Tita. The doctor said that there's a big possibility that he'd be able to wake up anytime this week." he said gladly though he could sense Ryuuma looking at him with anguish in his eyes.

"What the hell are you doing here?? We don't need you to make things worse than they already are!!" Ryuuma said.

"Ryuuma!! Tomare!!(Stop!!)" his mother scolded.

"It's ok Tita! I should go. I can see that you don't want my presence here...right Ryuuma??" Joshua said. Just sa he reached for the door....

"Wait!! Wakarimasen!!(I don't understand!!) Why do you have to go in a rush? I haven't had enough time to know you!" she said. He smiled gently then looked back.

"When the right time comes....Daine...." he said as he walked out the door.

"Mama? Who is he?" she asked.

"None of your concern little sister. Let's forget he ever came into your life ok?" Ryuuma said with an evil grin on his face. HE had an idea....

"Mama...you need rest...why don't you go ahead and I'll just take care of Daine ok??" he said acting like the snake he really is.

"OK Ryuuma....but are you sure you'll be fine??" she asked with a worried look on her face. He grinned menacingly.

"I'm sure Mama...." he said acting concerned.

The plan was to make her forget about Josh and their whole secret. HE wanted her to fall in-love with his best friend. It was brilliant.....or so he thinks...

"B-b-big brother??" Daine said. He grinned.

"yes...my litlle angel???" he said.

"Would you mind....telling me my story??" she asked.

"Of course my little sister....I'd love to tell you your story...." he said fakingly. Just then she sensed something wrong....she just smiled. Something was up....but what???....

TO BE CONTINUED.....

Last edited by _fire_tree_ (2008-05-30 12:41:49)

Last edited by _fire_tree_ (2008-05-30 02:52:44)

@jhayyuliajay: ui.. same pla tayo

oops may typo ka.

_fire_tree_ wrote:

"None of tour concern little sister. Let's forget he ever came into your life ok?"

your dapat yan dba? ahihiihi

cool storry. weeeeeeeee.

---mad4u--- wrote:

@jhayyuliajay: ui.. same pla tayo

hmmm...?why? ur twelve din...?

Joshua walked silently through the corridors. It was my fault!! he thought. If I hadn't told her that I loved her, Ryuuma would never have hated me.... I know my cousin loves him so much...but what could I do?? He stopped walking. He threw his phone to the wall then fell on his knees. He dropped his head. Just then...a hand touched his shoulder....

"J-J-Josh...." a familiar voice said. HE was startled.

"Bry???" he said. HE looked around and saw His cousin's gentle smile. He suddenly stood up and began hugging him.

"hey! No mushy stuff alright? I was just gone for a few days and here you are..acting all emo for me..." he joked.

"I just miss you buddy!!" Josh said. HE didn't wanna tell him about what happened to Daine. He just can't! BUt Bryan sensed something was up.

"I know something's up Josh....what is it?" Bryan asked. Josh kept silent. HE let go of him.

"Josh...speak up! I know you wouldn't throw your own phone to the wall without any reason." he said. Josh looked down.

"I-I-It's Daine.... she's.....she has amnesia...." Josh said.

"what??" he said softly. An abrupt moment of silence followed. He placed his hand on Josh's shoulder.

"Take me to her.." he said.....

....WAHAHAHAHAHA.... writer's block ata to!!! grrrrr......

Last edited by _fire_tree_ (2008-06-02 11:32:10)

@ate jhayyuliajay: hahaha

@_fire_tree_

_fire_tree_ wrote:

Things are gping according to planned!

typo. ulit. ahihi:)

this is getting exciting. haha
but im kinda confused

Last edited by ---mad4u--- (2008-06-01 13:46:00)