
wew, xuper bilis naman ni ken 
nice chappie siz,
i'll fur the next chappie 

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Wow maganda pala ini - ignore ko lang..
update naman jan


lucknskill wrote:
Wow maganda pala ini - ignore ko lang..
update naman jan
It's OK. 
I'm glad you liked it!
Note: Update longer than expected. Please wait!
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CHAPTER 10:
i wonder where anna is right now? i told her to meet me here on the hill...
"raf!!"
"anna! what took you so long?"
"eer.. umm..."
hindi kaya magalit tong c raf pag i tell him na me and ken went out??
"uumm... i went to the mall with rhea.."
"oh.. ok then... so..."
[phone ringing]
Anna: Hello?
Ken: Anna! I'm here at the mall. I got 2 tickets to a movie. Wanna come with?"
Anna: Not now, please. I'm busy.
Ken: Come on. We're friends, right?
Anna: I know, but...
Ken: No buts, meet me in Mall of Asia right away...
Anna: No.. I don't---
[hangs up]
"who was that?"
"umm... it's rhea.. she wants me to go to this shoe sale at the mall... but i didn't wanna go.. i wanna stay here.. with you..."
"aaw... how sweet.."
"raf... i just want to let you know.. i made up my mind... if you have to leave... it's ok... just.. atleast have contact with me.... ok?"
"ok..."
"wait... i haven't heard of ken 4 a while... how is he?"
"i dunno... haven't seen him either..."
"really? but i --"
"hey anna! let's go.."
"wat do u mean 'go'?"
"i meant go watch a movie... i called you a lil while ago..."
"but how did you know i was here?"
"u always go here..."
"yeah.. she does.. y didn't u tell me u and ken were goin out anna??!"
"i 4got... i'm sorry..."
"and y would u go out with my gf ken? u know nman diba..."
"i do... but i got sick of waiting... ur leaving and i'm having anna all to my self..."
"i don't think so.. anna.. u choose... me, ur bestfriend and ur bf.. or ken... my backstabber friend??"
"i dunno.."
"wat do u mean, you don't know?"
"pls. give me more time to think about this, ok?!!"
"anna, wait!"
guyz.. i have a big big prob... i'm inlove with 2 people!
who will i choose??
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nakakaexcite story mu sis!
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^yah sis!,
your ryt!
dapat honest siya sa bf niya!
hayy nakuh!
friend fah nmn nng bf niya
yong tina-tagoan niya
nng secret!,
update nah pouh!
...

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ang bitin aman....
nxt chappie puh siz...
hihihi i'll wait...
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ajaja
dapat c bestplen piliin nya
ajaja..
gravbeh naman
so kakaloka sist..
daming probz.. 
i'll wait fur the next chapie 

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Thanks for your comments guys! I promise I'll make Chapter 11 longer. So long, I'll even put it on a spoiler.
Haha.. Please wait for it! 
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^sure sis!
but when will you post it??.,
still waiting for the next chappie
of your story!
,,,

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Cutie_Phunk wrote:
^sure sis!
but when will you post it??.,
still waiting for the next chappie
of your story!,,,
Maybe next week sis. 
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wee. w8 ko nx chap! nice story! weeeee..


yna_16 wrote:
wee. w8 ko nx chap! nice story! weeeee..
Thanks for the support!
CHAPTER 11:
anna... wat r u doing?? wat is ur HEART doing?? u should know by now who u like better, ryt??
is it..
ken??
or..
raf??
me and raf have been through a lot.. but he's leaving... y would he leave in d first place??
and ken..
hm... he's a nice guy..
i really didn't know y i avoided him so much...
eeeeerrr....
anna!!! make ur decision!!
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anna..
y did u do this 2 me??
i thought things were getting great between us...
and ken..
y would YOU steal ANNA from ME?
anna...
no matter wat happens..
i love you...
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ok ken...
step 1 is accomplished...
step 2 is almost ready..
u can do this..
ANNA will be YOURS IN NO TIME....
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[in school the other day]
"so you see class, math is not only a subject, it's a passion...."
again with the math?? eerr... i have other things 2 think about...
"ms. reyes!"
"eeer.. umm... wat??"
"are you listening??"
"i guess..."
"ok then... let's see u answer THIS equation..."
ano ba 2!!! so über hard!!
"ahhmm... mr. tan... i can't--"
[bell ringing]
"ok.. class dismissed"
uugh.. saved by the bell...
there's raf!! i better apologize..
"raf!! raf!!"
hmm.. bakit d nia ako pinapansin??
ouch..
i feel like my heart has been broken into pieces...
i can't go 2ru a day w/o talking 2 him...
what have you done anna???
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ouch..
y did u do that?
raf naman oh...
she juz needs tym..
its not lyk she's dumping u 4 ken or anything..
just think positive....
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anna...
ano ba??
there's no time left.
raf or ken should be calling any minute now...
TAMA BA TONG NAPASUKAN KO?
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^hayy nakuh!
ewn cuh sayo anna!
bxtha sakin si raf!
,,,
update nah sis!

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nah.. gulo mo anna! haha bgay mo nlng s iba ung isa! 
willing to w8 for the nx chap! 


CHAPTER 12:
aawtz...
am hatin' it.. soo much..
d ako makakain..
d ako maka2log...
ikw kc anna eh...
bad timing..
haaiiiz...
lyf tlaga...
well...
i've made my decision...
[phone ringing]
yes! tamang-tama... c raf...
Raf: "Anna, nakapagdecide ka na ba??"
Anna: "Yeah... But I need to talk to you guys PERSONALLY."
Raf: "OK. On hill??? What time?"
Anna: "5:30, right after school."
Raf: OK, I'll call Ken."
perfect timing...
anna.. kaya mo yan!!!
TIRAH TIRAH!!!
haha... 
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sino kaya pipiliin ni anna...
i hope it's me...
[daydreaming]
"I choose, KEN."
"I knew it! I love you anna! Come ride with me and my horse and forever live in my palace!
"Yes, my prince"
[phone ringing]
Ken: Hello?
Raf: Ken! It's me! Anna wan't us to go to the hill tomorrow after school. 5:30. Nakapag-decide na siya....
Ken: Aah... Geh.. Pero alam ko naman kung sino pipiliin niya eh...
Raf: Me too.
Ken: Me.
[they said this at the same time]
Raf: Me.
Ken: Haha... You're funny. Anyways, it's so obvious it's me. BTW, I need to go. Bye.
Raf: Whatever. OK. See you tomorrow.
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[the next day]
uughh.... it's 5:15... 15 more minutes.. hope u made a good decision anna...
this will affect ur lyf and their lives...
[on the hill]
"anna!"
"raf.. it's good 2 see u..."
"u too.."
"anna! i'm here!"
"oh. ken... nice to see u too.. so, u guys ready?"
"ready as i'll ever be..."
"ok... guys.. i like both of u very much... BUT... i only have to choose one..."
this is it... get ready anna....
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this is it.... get ready raf...
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this is it... get ready ken..
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I choose:
RAF...
"yes!!!! i knew u'd choose me... thanks so much!!!"
"of course... eermm... ken.. i'm sorry... but..."
"you'll pay for this anna... u've made the wrong decision... someday, u'll regret this..
"wait, don't--"
"aaaw, don't mind him besty.... let's go home na.."
he seems so sad...
what if...
he's right...
what if...
I'll regret the decision i make?? 
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=|hey guys im new here
Ummm I Joanna's Bestie Please help me and thanks !!!

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Sunshine0918 wrote:
=|hey guys im new here
Ummm I Joanna's Bestie Please help me and thanks !!!
Hey Mai! Thanks for posting... Hehe... 
I'll post 13 tomorrow. 
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its really cute
im proud of u lil sis
mwaaa!
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