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#1  2008-07-17 09:20:23

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"killer smile" [chapter 2]




One day, my mother tell me that he (killer smile) invites us to the party of  his mother.

I said to my mother, “Ayoko, Mama. Huwag mo na tanungin kung bakit ayoko.

She didn’t ask me a question. But alam ko na taking-taka siya. But she said to me “Kaibigan natin sila. Pumayag ka na magpunta tayo.

I k0ow I will see his girlfriend but for my mother I will go to the party…

So my mother and I, go to the party… sinalubong agad kami niya kasama yung girlfriend niya… he smile at me w/ that killer smile.

So… pinakilala niya sa amin yung girlfriend niya… I just smile at her but I am not happy.

Mean while, during the party goes on. I am looking at him and his girlfriend. They are so sweet and I think he is happy w/ that girl. I feel so jealous about the girl.

After the party, I go to my room and I to my mother that I wanna sleep, pero buong magdamag ay umiiyak lang ako. Iniisip ko siya buong magdamag. I am thinking kung bakit bumalik uli itong feelings ko sa kanya.

But after that day, I just realize na hindi lang dapat siya ang isipin ko lagi… magpapapunta na lang ako kay Mama sa mga pinsan ko at sa ibang friends ko… dapat maging happy naman ako… and I just decided na maging masaya ako para sa kanya.

chapter 1: http://friendstertalk.com/t38149-%22kil…-1%5D.html

Last edited by kathleen24 (2008-07-17 09:30:29)





I have a cerebral palsy. i can't walk and move my hands easily.

#2  2008-07-17 13:09:17

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Re: "killer smile" [chapter 2]

Hey the story seems cool.
Just a suggestion, add a bit of conversations
on the next chapters okay? ^_^

and btw,
please just create one topic for your story.
making one thread for each chapter
adds lag to this section..okay?

thanks.



#3  2008-07-18 09:43:04

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Re: "killer smile" [chapter 2]

ok. i will do that..

hehehe. i will try to compose din ng true story ko.





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#4  2008-07-29 04:10:41

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Re: "killer smile" [chapter 2]

sa Aug. may next chapter itong "Killer Smile"

teecee.. God bless..





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#5  2008-07-29 05:46:50

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Re: "killer smile" [chapter 2]

heyah,double posting and don't speak tagalog coz we're not in the regional section. =)

ur story? nahh.,don't like it. :P only two conversations.,add more.,




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#6  2008-07-31 12:12:53

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Re: "killer smile" [chapter 2]

As cicatrizes wrote:

heyah,double posting and don't speak tagalog coz we're not in the regional section. =)

ur story? nahh.,don't like it. :P only two conversations.,add more.,

ok.. i will post a new chapter by Aug. i will add more two conversations..

thank you.





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#7  2008-08-02 07:11:15

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Re: "killer smile" [chapter 2]

weeeh!.,
hehe.
nyc story!.,
kip it up sis!
heheh.

hmm..
w8ing 4 da nxt chappie! = D



~juliene~



open the spoiler..

#8  2008-08-02 07:30:24

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Re: "killer smile" [chapter 2]

its ok.. :D kip it up.. :D



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#9  2008-08-04 07:03:26

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Re: "killer smile" [chapter 2]

thank you. right now i am composing a new chapter. hope you will like. i have many conversation.










:)





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#10  2008-08-19 03:37:49

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Re: "killer smile" [chapter 2]

Please update it asap ^_^ thank you..



#11  2008-08-19 08:09:43

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Re: "killer smile" [chapter 2]

where's chap 1?
plz pm me.
and plz giv the link <3
=3




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#12  2008-08-19 08:11:51

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Re: "killer smile" [chapter 2]

oops sori.
sori f0r 2 posting.
i olredi found chap 1




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#13  2008-08-19 12:05:29

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Re: "killer smile" [chapter 2]

Hi! My name is Rachel M. Chak
I'd like to be your friend!
Anyways Good job!
I love your story you have a great story anyways pls check mine:
http://friendstertalk.com/t38614-%26%23…21%21.html

Well good luck! :)


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