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just want to share my first ever poem i made for God...ayiii....actually i've done this before our prelim in Speech lab, i wasn't able to have a poem so that i made my own poem in just 10mins.. and because of insufficient idea and the cramming...the lyrics of my favorite Christian songs came into my mind.. these are the ff. songs that i used on my poem:

FROM THE INSIDE OUT
LORD OF FREEDOM
JESUS I SURRENDER
HOSANNA
HEART OF WORSHIP
ONE WAY,JESUS
NOW THAT YOU'RE NEAR

and here it is....

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TO YOU MY GOD

A thousand times I failed
But still Your mercy remains
You are the Lord of freedom
You took away my pains

Here at Your very feet
I'm crying out to You
And I myself surrender
Be my God, be my Savior

I see a new revival
I see a new generation
Rising up and praying
Accepting and seeking

Everlasting, Your light will shine on
And I'll bring You more than a song
You're the only one that I could live for
I want to spend my life with You forever..

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and after i delivered it in front of the class i've got a 96%!!! yeah!!! Praise God!!! and my professor gave me a comment of >>>GOOD VOICE<<<