#1 2008-07-26 12:07:19
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She Made Me Do It [poem]
okay, i worked on this poem at school when i had nothing to do.
it is basically all about revenge. i need constructive criticisms.
tell me what you think? poem's in spoiler
the part: Goodbye was the last thing I heard from her
Before she turned and ran away...
is actually what happened before everything else. ayt? 
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#2 2008-07-26 12:58:11
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Re: She Made Me Do It [poem]
hahahaha so groosm 
nice though! reaaal creative. nice job 
grooooosm XD but i guess it can't be avoided cause of the death thing 
"We're young. We're fine. Let's do some damage."
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#3 2008-07-26 13:41:40
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Re: She Made Me Do It [poem]
hehe.. sorry for the groooosssmmmness of my poem..
i usually do life in general, so this poem is one of my 'collection of poems'.. heehee.
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